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I am taking all of my chances,
Gathering all that I had,
I decided not to stay here,
Thinking of nothing but you,
My mind became clear,
My wheel of fate turned,
Putting trust on chance,
I continued to believe,

I looked up to the sky,
You seized my heart,
My light of hope dimmed,
All I could do was to shout,
But I must still continue,
Stepping forward valiantly,
Your name was all I could hear…

I was wishing for more time,

For my wounds to be healed,
I must endure and have hope,
I was happy to be saved,
My journey is nearing its end,

I was searching for you,
I did not believe it before,
Now I know that I exist because…
©2005-2009 ~bloody7lunacy
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Submitted: February 26, 2005
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Well... There's a catch to this poem... And only a few people know about it... Those who wish to know note me... This is also part of the Crying Angel poem... It happened somewhere in the middle of the Crying Agel poem... Hope you guys like it...
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wow, that's very well written!
I agree, that is an excellent poem the drawning is really great for what it is worth too.

This poem is really great.

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Courage and Honor.
It's extremely well written. The last 2 lines of the first stanza are just unbelievable. Hehe, I just might have to use that quote again. Congrats.

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:w00t: My gallery: [link] :blowkiss:
Both the poem and the drawing are just amazing. You're extremely gifted... You should be greatful

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Stinson, Tiernan Guillermo (1988-2015): Poet, Author, Playwright, Musician, Actor, Artist, Comedian, Philosopher.
That's really good! I love how you write! (I shall send you a note...)

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"When the last tree is cut down, when the last field is paved over, and when the last river is dammed, only then will people realize that they can't eat money."

Extinction is Forever.
wow, this is beautiful. I love the poem and I just completely adore the picture. Nice way to express feelings to a boy/girl, whoever.... You are really talented, keep it up!

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ha! your stupidity intrigues me.......
beautiful....

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I close my eyes and all the world drops dead~Sylvia Plath~
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wow... lovely draw... love it...

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There´s no one I can turn to with this love
amazing.......truly amazing......i love it :)

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